Such a sweet poem with flowing imagination .
Beautiful imagery.

"Jump over the stars....

Could make a tiny nest......"

Enjoyed the poem. Keep writing:)Keep dreaming big:)

Jyoti,all your dreams will come out true.
GOD BLESS.

Jyoti,all your dreams will come out true.
GOD BLESS.

Jyoti,all your dreams will come out true.
GOD BLESS.

Jyoti,all your dreams will come out true.
GOD BLESS.

Jyoti,all your dreams will come out true.
GOD BLESS.

Jyoti,all your dreams will come out true.
GOD BLESS.

Oh god alka jiiiiiiii
awesome............you make me happy, if somebody become reason of happiness for them uuuuuuha

I wish I could feel my life as I want

^^I find this a heartfelt thought and wish. Its a thought
I too have at times. Someday all these wishes will be laid
out for you. A uplifting write that gives a smile :)
Take care.

Jyoti, I really loved the simplicity of the message you delivered in this poem. I think so often in life we never stop to think about things we wish we could do or things we wish we had. This poem plays a lot into my childhood fantasies that I might have imagined when I was little. It's also somewhat relevant to the present me as well. Sometimes when relaxing and sitting outside I daydream about such things that you mention in the poem.

In all, this was a joy to read and I am glad I was able to read it. Again, simplicity is often so underused in poetry, but you used it and to a wonderful affect. I hope you continue to write and grow in your talent. Great job and keep writing!

The pictures with words were good.