Uncondistional love

Gareth, this is beautiful. I love the way you portray the father-daughter bond because it is one that should never be broken.

First, as everlasting said the title needs to be amended.

Secondly, i think that the different rhymes could be separated into a few short stanzas like this-

Having you as my daughter has aloud me to experience something
that i thought was impossible to find.
A true unconditional love that dose really exist in my body spirit soul and mind.
All the love I have inside for you I have to give.
you have given me enough motivation will and strength to live.

It didn't matter where you moved we could be a million miles apart.
I would walk bare foot every step of the way with you in my heart.
it would matter if my feet were bruised or battered.
or if i was half dead or shattered.
id walk all the way all morning and through the night.
id get there one day with you in my sight.

the thought of you your scream your laugh and your cheeky smile
would shorten every mile

Also i think it would look better if the start of each sentence would be capitalized and if the id was made into 'I'd.

it would matter if my feet
^^
I think the would here should be wouldn't.

I hope this helps.
All in all a good write. Em

Hello,

There's nothing wrong with having grammatical errors, and neither I am a Grammar nazi, however, I thought I could point out a few typos/errors that I could find while reading your poem. The following are suggestions and you are free to take them into consideration or to ignore them.

First in the title, I think it should be written "unconditional" without the extra "s" that it has.

Second, in the second sentence:

"A true unconditional love that dose really exist in my body spirit soul and mind."

^ I think there's a typo in "dose." Should it be "does"?

thirdly, It would help your poem if you capitalize the letters after the periods.

and fourthly, I've been told that no one truly experiences love until they become a parent. I feel you have expressed that wonderful feeling in this poem.

Welcome to PnQ!

P.s. there are few other typos that I did not point out and other sentences that may benefit and enhance your poem letter if you add more punctuation. However, I like the feeling in this piece. Keep writing.