Some people don't think that simple is better but I do. This poem is proof that it doesn't take "big words" to express the message you have for us. Your words are understandable and it doesn't take lots of them to get the message to us.
We should not fear death since it is a part of the life process, we are born, we live, we die. We need the sleep to rest our weary bodies, to keep the strength to live, to continue to expand our feelings and emotions to others around us and live a happy life until we do die. Nice work.