:) Well here it is. A typical mother and child conversation. A child can go hay wire and say things in anger but mums are mums...always keeping cool and giving what the child wants.

The ending put a smile to my face...thanks..take care.

Haha, I love this.

Or perhaps the child protests the confinement of the (s)mothering dictates of the mom yet has only the strength to vocalize his displeasure without carrying his rebellion through.

Excellent slice of reality just as quirky as it comes, Luce.

I love the tone and the language you use in this write and i also love the mothers reply, she just cuts right through him with one word....the power of a mother is one to be reckoned with :)

My only thing...."myself burn" i think that should be burnt.,,,,,but even so i really liked this piece :)

Really liked this. I thought it was interesting to have the relationship between the mother and son and use the coffee to show your message. I think you done well to use the contrast of cold and hot coffee, and what they mean.

In this line:

At least, I can drink it in one go without getting myself burn.

Burn should be burnt.

Creative piece, well done.

I love the creativity in your poems each one is wonderful in its own way and uses a different style and voice to capture the story or personality of each individual idea. Greatly penned to show the dynamics of family members.