Without Realizing It
by PineappleKing Dec 6, 2014
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You keep asking me how its easy for me to make you smile. You say that I can do it without a single effort, that I do it even when I am half asleep. My answer to you has never wavered from the truth or varied in form in any way. As a way to prove my point I asked you a simple question, "have you ever noticed that I smile alot when I am around you?" You said yes and proved my point to the fullest. |
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9 years ago
by Baby Rainbow
Oh, this is beautiful and so warm and romantic!
If you love someone they make you smile so much, and that in itself speaks volumes more than explaining why! I find this poem so fuzzy!
I always like the idea of questions, and how one answer is all it takes to give such a big message, and in this case you did just that.
I also like your title, because it implies both ways, this person doesn't realise how much they affect you, and make you feel so lovely, but at the same time, you don't seem to realise how much you make them feel the same because it comes so easily without effort. And quite right, love should be effortless to prove, it should be felt!
Loving this write! -
9 years ago
So different and probably to a lot of people would not be called 'a poem' but it has such a poetic flow and style that I would beg to differ.
It contains such a depth of feeling that at once seems very personal yet does not feel like an intrusion and is open enough for the reader to be able to equate their own emotions to the words used.
A beautiful little gem :) -
9 years agoby BlueJay
I like the paragraph style stanza followed by a single isolated line as the conclusion, but it is well penned and the honesty here is wonderful. You truly created the scene in a way that worked not only beautifully but easily because it is detailed without taking away the reader's ability to apply it to their own memories. I like that you incorporated pieces of your conversation with person and the scene. The style is unique in its own way and I love how you weren't trying to conform to the typical "rules" of poetry.
Very unique little piece.
Nicely penned
