Comments : Love Lessons

  • 7 years ago

    by nourayasmine

    FINALLY YOU CAME UP WIH A PIECE ABOUT THE BABY.

    Sorry.

    BUT I'M SO EXCITED ABOUT THIS!!!!!!

  • 7 years ago

    by yogi73

    Great write. I found it mysterious and intriguing, and wondering what is the back story on this poem. a very mature poem ya gots here. Love it!

    • 7 years ago

      by abracadabra

      Thank you. This is about the human growing in my womb.

  • 7 years ago

    by konpreah

    Stardust, the substance of our bodies - a lovely image full of mystery and wonder.

  • 7 years ago

    by Yakari Gabriel

    How did i miss this???

    omg <3

  • 7 years ago

    by Yakari Gabriel

    I just can't get over this beauty

  • 6 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello,

    How wonderful is this?

    The sweet sentimental way you have written this speaks volumes. The Ocean simile is apt, as is the intimate stranger.

    Birth is miraculous and marvelous. I remember listening to the liquid gurgling sounds, straining my ear to hear my then unborn son. Little did I know my crown was being inspected! lol

    As I have said this is sweet and beautiful. I hope your baby is just as sweet, beautiful and healthy.

    ((hugs))

    Michael

  • 6 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    This really is a beautifully crafted and well written piece that had me smiling by the end. Well done and all the very best,
    Ben

  • 5 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    This is an amazing write! totally knocked it out the park!

    I love the whole piece but that last stanza is genius.

    Epic Write

    Ben