AMAZING!!!!

Luuuucero! this is an awesome piece!! I just love the way you have worded this the word choice, tempo and flow is perfect, But, the way you presented this is just epic, to me it reads as something old, it's kinda like old english or shakspearean without the thee's and thou's...right now i am very annoyed i can't nominate....this is wonderful.

You know for some reason I could picture a maiden holding onto her love and speaking out these feelings. I like how you have given character to the Nectarine...nice read dear :)