Comments : Collapse

  • 4 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Just that first line is so powerful and emotional. I can picture finally allowing yourself to cry and then being in the bitter cold, not having shelter from that person. Sorry for whatever you're going through <3

  • 4 years ago

    by Rania Moallem

    Oh Jee, :( I really miss you and this Collapse poem is just as heart aching. Few words but enough to express in a very beautiful way what you're feeling.

    It's not hard to actually feel and sense and see the image you've created for us. I think there is nothing harder than losing the source of strength, especially when it is someone we hold dear. I love this poem and can relate.

  • 4 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Wonderful piece achieved in so little space. Excellent

  • 4 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Powerful little piece that says an awful lot in so little space