I love it when you use the sun as a metaphor, no one uses it as well as you do. Even if its a sad situation you are in you still shine with your words.

Loved it <3

You are more than a sniffle... <3

I adore this piece on so many levels.

The message of smiling and blazing like the sun within darkness is so very captivating within this small poem... Its you, so very you! Just a beautiful poem here Nana!

The idea of a ghost sighing, that kind of makes me sad. It's creative though and you personify that well along with the sun. It makes me think we admire the sun for its heat, yet also curse it for blazing too much. I like how in this instance, you say you will continue, try to survive, when in reality you're suffering and it seems not many can see past your facade.

Such depth in this piece!

Enjoyed this one even more :) but again know i've read (IN MY SILLY LITTLE OPINION) better work by you

To how much I know 'myself' this poem describes 'you' perfectly :p
Just Like the sunshine...always brings a smile and always blazing