Comments : Mirror:

  • 9 years ago

    by gumshuda

    Oh wow...what a wonderful poem...
    Truly mirrors lack the ability to reflect the truth...reflections are not perfect..Are not complete...
    Who we are we are from within...people should look for what is within because what is outside is not what we make but we got from the heavens above..but what we have inside is what er really have..what we really are...what we have got what we have made....

    I love this is beautiful...perfectly describes some of my fundamental beliefs... :)

    Its weird that most of your poems have still been noticed.....I'll correct that as I get time :)

    Wonderful poem...keep writing

  • 9 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Scott- Adore this poem!

    You have an elegant flow, rhythm and style... It reads with a ton of powerful feelings mixed within!

    Mirrors can only show the outer you- true beauty is within... Yes, I needed this poem today!

  • 9 years ago

    by Sunshine

    I agree with the ladies! I doubt I have much left to add, but this is truly a flawless flowing poem. It has a very fast short pace, a good structure and most of all a very relate-able and truthful moral.

    I loved how you constructed this line a lot,

    For who I am - I am from within
    it gave it a push of elegance.

    Mirrors and people can rarely if hardly reflect who we really are, aside that even we ourselves fail to express and reflect the right image and who we truly are, as a result of the life we live.

    The beauty is but of that in the soul and heart, but sometimes no matter how much we hide it, something inside of us beats down the masks and does reflect who we are when reaching the peak.

    thanks for sharing.

  • 9 years ago

    by Euphanasia

    Nice imagery

  • 8 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    I love the flow and so elegantly written

  • 8 years ago

    by Meme

    Best mirror piece I ever read. Usually the phrase and/or idea of the mirror on the wall is often used in such a cliched way. But in your poem I found a new dimension, a new meaning, and an amazing piece that I am so happy to add to my favorites list.

    It reads like a haunted song, those little rhymes you have are spot on.


  • 6 years ago

    by Lyical Madness

    This is amazing Scott- Favorited without a doubt-Thank you for sharing x

  • 6 years ago

    by Phil

    Loved this Scott

  • 6 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Beautifully written piece of self defection loved it x