Never Try To Be Like Me..

by Bayan   Feb 21, 2015

Be whatever You want To Be
But Never Try To Be Like Me

I'd Be The Wrath if You were Ease
I'd Be The Storm if You were Breeze

That's Why I Say, From June To May
and That's My Life of Everyday

So, Think Again of What You Want
if it was Me, I'd Tell You Don't

You'll Never Be what I Can Be
That's Why I'm Sure, it Can't Be Me


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  • 4 years ago

    by Eric Ngobeni


  • 4 years ago

    by Tim

    I love it!

    The use of language is perfect, you've really tried to capture and re-capture the message here, printing it different ways to further outline the message, which strengthens the image in the readers mind. Great technique!

    Although I'm sure it's not true. I'm sure being like you is a wonderful think to aspire to be.

    • 4 years ago

      by Bayan

      Aww thats so nice of u :))
      well Thank You so much u really Made My day :))