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  • 9 years ago

    by Everlasting

    I could not understand what you meant with this poem... could you explain to me either by Pm or in here?

  • 9 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    I feel there is a lot in here which only you know and you have seen it to have written it.

    Eyes are not dreams

    ^^I see a dreamy person who is not facing reality instead with dreamy eyes, that is what I understand here.

    heart is not glass
    blood is not water
    life is not gift

    ^^These three lines here shows me a person who does not shatter easily because of his/her dream world. Who at the same time feels that relationships can be taken for granted or forgotten; hence blood is not water. As for the last line "life is not gift" perhaps this person feels that its because of him/her life exists. Perhaps overall wrongful thoughts are blinding this person...?

    From the remaining lines I gather that this person is the right person to handle things which are good or bad because he/she is cut out for it and is good at handling it. Let me know if my thoughts are right.

  • 9 years ago

    by Michael

    I like this poem but i have one correction that you might want to make

    life is not gift should be life is not a gift

    I Think if you make the correction i would be able to read the poem easier than what i read it as because i think you are missing some words in between lines

    enjoy the feedback

    • 9 years ago

      by Jyoti Rawat

      Hmmmm
      Well thank vote or comment your suggestion accepted. I hope you would understand what i mean in this poem.
      Thanks and enjoy