Deep Breaths (Senryu)

by liliumity   Mar 30, 2015


I've missed breathing
The feel of air in my lungs.
Please stop choking me.

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I dunno. This is a thing. 3/29/15

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  • 9 years ago

    by BlueJay

    I agree, this is a senyru more than a haiku. But, I love the word choice you used here, it makes your point come even more alive. I can feel the suffocation in this piece and the overwhelming emotion. A fantastic senyru.

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