Comments : Caliraya

  • 8 years ago

    by alka mendiratta

    Dashiel,you just sway the reader in your poetry .This time riding a boat on an artificial lake ................remembering the beautiful moments ......the love for Dandelions.

  • 8 years ago

    by Karla

    Gorgeous piece!

  • 8 years ago

    by GB

    Weekly contest April 6th
    Judging comment:

    I'm impressed by the poetic skills used in this writing, the journey across the Caliraya lake narrated excellently. His introduction was very attractive, referring to his memories of the dandelion, a word that was used several times in the poem giving a great example for the poetic use of repetition.
    A great diction and a very balanced tone we feel in every stanza, despite the random structure of the poem.
    His closure as well was not less enthusiastic, it's the part where the poet conjoin the relation between the lake and the dandelion, and its poetry, at its finest level.

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    This is a flawlessly written piece. An absolute joy to read, well structured and truly poetic throughout.

  • 8 years ago

    by Dancing Rivers

    Oh my gosh im absolutely nominating this one next week and adding to my favourites. A stunningly eloquent and beautifique piece.