Comments : I Can't Anymore

  • 10 years ago

    by DanceDevonDance

    Beautifully written.

  • 10 years ago

    by C Cattaway

    You can.
    Well put together. Each segment placed in sequence. I liked the simplicity. Well done x

  • 10 years ago

    by Fallengod667

    I really like the repetition. Short and sweet, very well written. Telling a beautiful story. 5/5 nice job.

  • 10 years ago

    by CRAFTY KEN

    Heartfelt, been there! Ken 5/5