Comments : Nothing new (II)

  • 4 years ago

    by Mahal Ko Kuya Ko

    There is nothing new in your life, you are stuck from the pain and hurt that sprang from her goodbye. You are stuck in yesterday and you just miss everything about her.

    Or a reson to forget you

    ^^^ 'reson' 'reason'

    Since you have gone

    ^^^ You can say 'Since you have been gone' or 'Since you've been gone' that would sound better .. Also 'Since you were gone'

    Hehe .. Other than that, good job (:

    --- MKKK

    • 4 years ago

      by Mohan

      Thank you.

  • 4 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    When love leaves us without reason which we can't comprehend, it makes us view the world lifeless. For love makes everything in life beautiful and sweet and without it sour it becomes. At the same time never forget there is a love waiting elsewhere!

  • 4 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    **double post

  • 4 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Hmmmmmmmmm

    Love is really painful, losing love with any reason is very painful,
    Nice poem.
    be Cherish your self because you are not deceiver.
    we can love someone but we can't hold all the time any one. IF any one wants to go let it be because they are not ours, then why we run behind dreams if we know one day them broke.

    Love is very painful be ready always for bear a pain.

  • 4 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Hmmmmmmmmm

    Love is really painful, losing love with any reason is very painful,
    Nice poem.
    be Cherish your self because you are not deceiver.
    we can love someone but we can't hold all the time any one. IF any one wants to go let it be because they are not ours, then why we run behind dreams if we know one day them broke.

    Love is very painful be ready always for bear a pain.

  • 3 years ago

    by Cindy

    There is always pain when we loose someone we love.
    Take care