The flashbacks
which come after
hurt more

than farewells.

^^This is so true. The flashbacks and memories hurt more then the actual moment of goodbye, for we are numbed and stoned to the point of not knowing what is going on. It all starts when reality hits home and memories become painful...a touching write.

Congratulations, this is just wow!

Congratulations hon! 5/5

- Mori

Well, you have a great gift to be proud of, very enjoyable writing.

Congratulations.

This really spoke to my heart.

My boyfriend and I are in a long distance relationship and we know all too well the pain that comes with goodbyes... and how it lingers long after they're gone.

Beautiful write.

Nice... I like it, thanks

Judging Comment

The vivid imagery throughout the piece was elegant and the wording was simple but stunning. The emotions popped out of these piece was a pleasure to read. Really relatable too to people who have had their hearts broken. Those that enjoy tragic love this is the best cup of coffee to read in a heartbroken day.

- Moria Bella Bair -

Judging Comment

Mahal, Your nature tones throughout any poem you write is so captivating. Within this poem I can feel a rhythmic pattern and flow within the stanzas. Very elegant and priceless poem!!