Comments : Pyaar/Love

  • 8 years ago

    by Jad

    That's an interesting view on love, and I find it to actually be a pretty true statement. We are always completed by those who fit with us perfectly, and the vice versa is true as well. The idea that we are incomplete without that person. Great job and keep writing!

  • 8 years ago

    by alka mendiratta

    Very well written Jyoti !!!!!

  • 8 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    You have made your point clear...so true! Love is about that one person who makes you whole and completes you for without that person's love, its emptiness...nicely penned :)

    • 8 years ago

      by Jyoti Rawat

      Thanks to all for appreciate my thought.
      I heartily believe in this.

  • 8 years ago

    by Saravana Kumar S

    Aaj pyar karne keliye tum woh,phir pata nahi dil kyun hai udaas,
    Dil ke sabse kareeb woh tum,phir kyun lage tum nahi ho mere pass,
    Zindagi bar rahe hum teri saath,magar itna waqt nahi diya khuda,
    Taqdeer pe likha hai hamesha pyar kare hum tumse rehte hue judaa...

  • 8 years ago

    by Mohan

    Nice one

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    This is beautiful. Love is a very strange feeling because even through it we will feel incomplete yet complete because that special person will complete us yet when we are apart we will be incomplete.

    Em