Dead Child

Some time can not be replace by, stay with us in memories its show's delicate love and pure love...

Really very connecting and appealing...

"Loud and deep, his voice, Far and deep, this river"

This paints a scene very effectively. While it's evident that English is not your first language, you command its use to beautiful effect.

This is a beautiful and sad little piece that thoroughly moved me.

"May these ripples be your friends"
^^^^^^^^

Excellent wording. A really delicate and moving write; well done and all the best,
Ben

That's sad; but wonderful.
"A boatman signs at
distance"
^this line is really nice.
A good start.
I love it.