Comments : From a Father

  • 4 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Larry I love this piece so damn much. Being a father its so relatable to me and heartfelt and for me is a perfect example of why poetry is a wonderful thing, to encompass something like complete love and devotion, more than that to a child in a wonderful way.

    Maybe its because of recent events ...or its the jamesons.....but this piece really touched me and genuinly thankyou for sharing.

    Nominated.

    • 4 years ago

      by Larry Chamberlin

      Thanks, Ben
      Even if it's the Jameson, I appreciate it.

  • 4 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Ok I came back to read sober....and yup it wasn't the Jamesons....really Larry I love this write!

  • 4 years ago

    by Meme

    I love this piece so much! Lucky are your children for having you as their father:)

  • 4 years ago

    by earlgreytea

    Aw. Gets me right in the daddy issues.

  • 4 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    All I could do after reading this is smile...no fancy words or flair just a simple wish and truth from a father to this child..lovely read :)

  • 4 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Beautiful !!!