Nothing quite so refreshing as an honest and frank poem. Might i advise that you tap into your subconscious poet and write for the sake of your soul rather than the sake of impressing ignorant people? You never know, you might find that you truly are a poet after all ;)

I think a few of us can equate with this one. :)

A nice introduction, open honest and well written. Don't fit in, just do what feels right and let the muse flow.

Yes, I can certainly relate to this, but as the ladies so rightly say below - write for you and write because you want to. Good write.