Comments : Let's drink tonight

  • 8 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Haha...milk is so yummy one can get drunk!

    Seriously, this write has that punch which we call life, the reality kicks in as I read and immerse with the feelings you pen...

    • 8 years ago

      by Everlasting

      Haha, Milk sure helps!

      Too bad that in my case, my face will be regretting it a few days later.

  • 8 years ago

    by Larry Chamberlin

    Love the "ranging in this heart" instead of the cliche "raging" Your word choice adds a layer of thought.

    The whole idea of sitting back instead of exploring gives an ironic twist. Relationships need time out from mutual discovery occasionally. Yet your challenge of mountains to climb (emotional at least) seems firmly rooted in the future.

    Typo: less should be let's

  • 8 years ago

    by alka mendiratta

    Excellent write :
    Well depicted emotions of life so true .....to your heart

    'ranging in this heart of mine '

    Keep penning:)