Feelings Pt.4 (Final)

by TheMask   Aug 22, 2015


The war is finally over
My feelings all but washed out
I walk the path away from all the torment you brewed
I let out my last screams
Yet this sensation won't leave
Regret finally bangs his fist at my door
The one feeling I've never felt before

Even looking towards the sky
I no longer see you
I see the sky as ravaged as I
I see the heavens as split as me
I see the thrones broken just like my heart
I walked away
I put my blade down
I let go of all I have
My hand, heart, and mind have no more within
I am no more then a mere shell I used to be
No. What you made me to be

The memories I scattered are coming back
Each hour, one by one, they return
Or is it each day, each week, each month
They seem different since last seen
They seem sadder then before
They seem touched by someone else
Is that why..
I still look at the sky...
My body still yearns for more
Is there anything left out there for me
Or am I a helpless fool
Who doesn't know when to quit
Can't let go these feelings

Even after all of that, I still extend my hand out
Towards the ravaged skies
Towards the split heavens
Towards the broken gods thrones
Towards your world
In hopes you still look at me
That your love was real
That these memories are yours
And you'll come back one day
To link our worlds together, again..

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  • 8 years ago

    by BlueJay

    "Regret finally bangs his fist at my door
    The one feeling I've never felt before "

    ^This really jumped out at me. I love the subtle rhymes and how honest it was while still being eons away from cliche'.

    I love the way you laced hope into every word of this only to make it shine so much brighter at the end than I was expecting . I love how each image you gave has both a personal meaning to your relationship and a metaphorical poetic meaning as well. I think that's what really set this piece apart from so many others I've read lately (not just here, but in a lot of places).

    Beautifully penned.

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