Comments : To have cared and loved it all.

  • 8 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Nadia firstly welcome to pnq its so good to see you here!! :)

    I really like this write, you created a piece with such a strong emotion flow with great word choice and format, this left me pondering and wanting to read more. 5/5 beautifully writte .

    BEN PICKARD YOU MIGHT WANNA READ THIS!

  • 8 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Like they say, better to live it all then never. I like the boldness of your voice which radiates in this write and I also like the spirit in which you have chosen to live life. An inspirational write for sure!

  • 8 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello,

    this is...

    Pure genius and poetry wrapped up in a neat little bow.

    Well done for the win.

    Take care,

    Michael

  • 8 years ago

    by DarkLight

    Real word flowing through you. great flow of poetry. i like it. i love it.
    5/5

  • 8 years ago

    by Nadia Selmann Casia

    Thank you so much. I have put a lot of thought into this poem, so I'm really glad that you like it <3

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Ben (Naughtymouse) - have done as you asked and am in awe of this piece. The rhythm and flow are truly exceptional - a deserved win.
    Well done.

  • 8 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    JUDGING COMMENT:

    This poem has a positive tone and while reading it
    I also got a sense of enlightenment on behalf of
    the poet. A feeling that this has been experienced
    and life's lesson has been tasted. This ending:

    without the need, to crave for more
    to have cared, and loved it all

    ^^I simply like this closing. This is what living life
    to its maximum and taking the step of going through
    it rather then stepping back means. A sense of fulfillment arises when we don't have to crave
    and yearn for things. A sigh filled with peace allows
    us to depart this world with a smile.

    An inspirational write to grab life by its reins and
    ride it! Well done and welcome to the site!

  • 8 years ago

    by Sunshine

    Oh the title and the poem bond.

    Such persistence, strength, determination, hope and Will.

    Fond of the repetition of I will, in some cases it might through the reader off, but I really felt the will in your repetition.
    The determination is crystal clear.

    This poem is inspiring and easy for general readers to relate, and for target readers to be touched.

    Well done and thanks for sharing.