Comments : But soft

  • 5 years ago

    by cassie hughes

    Poetic perfection. I love the 'old world' feel to this created not only by your choice of wording but also by the rhyme and flow. This one is definitely going in my favourites. :)

  • 5 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Have to agree with Cassie on this one...beautiful, this has such a wonderful flow and I really, REALLY, like how the words you use are soft and hard...

    "Tender hatred warms your smile,
    when nature births something vile."

    ^^^^^ I adore this, like i say soft and hard and the outcome is wonderful!!!

  • 5 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Made me jealous of this one Hazel. Two stunning pieces in a row.

    • 5 years ago

      by Dancing Rivers

      Haha ben you're a banana! :) but thank you :)