Comments : A turbulent Sea - your skin [ Experiment]

  • 10 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    What an excellent piece of writing. Excellent use of metaphors throughout - wonderful imagery.

    • 10 years ago

      by Everlasting

      Thank you Ben, attempting to write sonnets can be hard. It's a changing experience.

  • 10 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    This is really beautiful, imaginative and so passionately alluring!! Loved this piece Luce!