Comments : The rising tide

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Ken,
    Wonderful piece - I almost felt like I was there on that boat with you! From the meandering and melodic first half of the poem to the darker second part of a coming storm and the dangers inherent, it was a fascinating read delivered in your usual charming style.
    Well done and all the best,
    Ben

  • 8 years ago

    by CRAFTY KEN

    Thanks Ben, lovely comments!

    Ken

  • 8 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    What I gather from this is one should never take life for granted, no matter how good it is or bad life's experience is our teacher-appreciate it.

    I like how the story unfolded of a beautiful moment then becoming a dangerous trail to tread upon. Alas one should always feel grateful for the blessings bestowed upon us :)

    • 8 years ago

      by CRAFTY KEN

      Thanks Meena, indeed when out to sea you go, many things may happen we know.

      Ken