Life

by ColeIan   Oct 23, 2015


Life can bring you down
Make you feel
like you may drown
but don't you frown
be a clown.
There is a way to cope
just have hope
if you look deep
with in your soul.
Life is no bed of roses
that's for sure.,
but hey don't be a bore
there's a cure
just look deep
within your core
just please be careful
not to hit the floor
. Raise your voice
and rejoice
sing a song
make it long
clap your hands
stomp your feet
don't give up
get the beat.
So when life hits
its the pits
but don't you
quit.

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  • 9 years ago

    by Greeter

    The flow is a bit rocky, however, I like the content of the poem. The cheerful tone. It's always nice to have a reminder to not give up specially to be reminded that life may be hard but that it is also good...

    Thanks for sharing and welcome to poems and quotes

  • 9 years ago

    by Shruti

    Hello ColeIan,
    welcome to poems & quotes.
    A heart-warming poem.
    I love the optimism in it. Life has its ups and downs, but we should sometimes try to forget our stress and enjoy life....and this poem do describes it well.
    Good and keep writing.
    5/5
    ~S