Comments : I'll be a vampire

  • 6 years ago

    by Cindy

    You tell the story of the vampire very well
    It verges on the edge or funny
    Good job
    Take care Cindy

    • 6 years ago

      by Everlasting

      Lol yes, that was the intend to be somehow funny.

  • 6 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    I like this and I enjoyed it as well!! Well done Luce :)
    A scary topic written in a funny tone...nice work.

  • 6 years ago

    by alka mendiratta

    Lucero it was fun reading this scary piece.

  • 5 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    This was a truly good slang poem.... It was fun and deep within the message....

    Well done Lucero.... Slang poems often go unnoticed, this one should not....

  • 5 years ago

    by Larry Chamberlin

    Carpe jugulum!

    • 5 years ago

      by Everlasting

      I have to look that up....

      Thank you Mr. Larry

  • 5 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Very scary indeed...spl this stanza

    OH and P.S., I'll have a coffin where I'll sleep
    because even vampires need their beauty sleep

    lolol

    Refreshing indeed :)

    all the best & take care

  • 5 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Hmmmmmm
    nice poems

  • 5 years ago

    by -Choke-On-MY-Halo-

    I wish I could nominate this one my dear friend, this was so beautiful and truly fun to read. Anyways it was fun.