You tell the story of the vampire very well
It verges on the edge or funny
Good job
Take care Cindy

I like this and I enjoyed it as well!! Well done Luce :)
A scary topic written in a funny tone...nice work.

Lucero it was fun reading this scary piece.

This was a truly good slang poem.... It was fun and deep within the message....

Well done Lucero.... Slang poems often go unnoticed, this one should not....

Carpe jugulum!

Very scary indeed...spl this stanza

OH and P.S., I'll have a coffin where I'll sleep
because even vampires need their beauty sleep

lolol

Refreshing indeed :)

all the best & take care

Hmmmmmm
nice poems

I wish I could nominate this one my dear friend, this was so beautiful and truly fun to read. Anyways it was fun.