Comments : Stained Apron

  • 3 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    This is a beautiful write, so wistfully written and dripping with imagery. I can almost smell that strawberry icing myself!
    I will nominate this on Monday when I have some votes.....and if I remember!
    All the best and I hope you are well,
    Ben

    • 3 years ago

      by Maple Tree

      Thank you Ben , always appreciate your comments and sentiment!

  • 3 years ago

    by Cindy

    The memories that we are able to cherish and hold dear in our hearts.
    This is such a beautiful piece. Sounds like it would have been a wonderful Thanksgiving.
    Excellent job
    Take care Cindy

  • 3 years ago

    by Angie

    Memories are treasures held in our hearts for a life time

    love this piece

  • 3 years ago

    by Dixiedaisy

    I love sentimental poetry, especially when it is so eloquently described you feel you are there. Awesome write.

  • 3 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    "Memories in the corner of my eyes". This indeed is a sentimental piece. These are the moments where we wished we could go back in time and relive that moment just one more time. I know I wished to go home and celebrate the holidays in my country the old fashion way. I will always cherish that.

  • 3 years ago

    by Cindy

    Congratulations on your win.
    Take care Cindy

  • 3 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Congrats on the win dear friend! Such a special piece <3

    • 3 years ago

      by Maple Tree

      Awww thank you ladies....

      My Papas smiling I just know it...thank you Mary Anne for inspiring me on this poem.

  • 3 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Childhood memories are those that needs to be treasured and will always remain with us no matter how long; and it pops into our mind just by a scent, a dish or a moment...well penned and Congrats on the win!

  • 3 years ago

    by Dixiedaisy

    Stained Apron by Maple Tree 
    (10pts.)

    What a joyful and reminiscent poem about longing for the past. You have created a lovely picture with your poetry, one that symbolizes youth and a harder way of life than what many have come accustomed to in this era of hustle and bustle. The title ties in beautifully with the poem. The poem allowed me to visualize things as they were told.