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by Moogi   Jan 3, 2016


I want you
I miss you
I need you now
To show me how
To love myself
So I can love
Somebody else

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  • 10 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hi, Moogi, and welcome to the site.

    A short but affective little piece from you here, filled with a quiet desperation.
    This strikes as a plea for a lost love to come back and show you how to love yourself again so that you can move on and love someone else.
    I enjoyed this - keep writing and all the best
    Ben

    • 10 years ago

      by Moogi

      Thank you Ben, I appreciate your compliment, and I plan to continue writing poems for as long as I can.