The tone of Friendship

by Ankita   Jan 5, 2016


We met like-
Two roses were dashing each other ,
In the season of spring
Flowery Flowery..happiness with a yellow tone.
Symbolising the tone of friendship
Here,comes one of them saying -
"Would you like to have my company ?"
(The other nodding its head in confusion)
Both becomes gloomy ;as they were hit by
The season of summer;
There comes a fairy touching ,
The glimpses,the petals of rose-
Making it lively once again .
As the tiny water droplets
Touch both of them -
They get fresh and smile along .
Both nid their heads to say -
A YES TO "THE TONE OF FRIENDSHIP"

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  • 8 years ago

    by -Choke-On-MY-Halo-

    It's so lovely and sweet! :0

  • 8 years ago

    by Aashi

    I really agree to the above comments.
    It's lovely.
    5.

  • 8 years ago

    by nancy

    Its really beautiful and sweet. Keep it up daer.

  • 8 years ago

    by nancy

    I really beautiful and sweet. Keep it up daer.

  • 8 years ago

    by Shruti

    Aw, so beautiful, lovely and so very sweet! By reading this I'm feeling like I'm surrounded by flowers...butterflies all around with the gorgeous sunlight...of friendship...
    Well, but have a look at the last second line. I think it should be 'nod' instead of 'nid'.
    Overall, I really like this.
    5/5 from me.
    Write more more more......
    *& tell me ok who it is about :).*
    ~S

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