Comments : Full moon

  • 4 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello,

    I like the musing here. The moon is mysterious. What would it feel, think if it could? A astral orb, brightly lit by the sun. The sun shining so brightly that its reflective light helps us not fear the dark long after sunset.

    Thanks again,

    Michael

    • 4 years ago

      by Everlasting

      Thanks for liking my haiku and for the thought provoking comment about the sun

  • 4 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hi Lucero,

    I love the imagery you have conjured here and the gentle musing of the piece in general.
    Well done and all the best,
    Ben

  • 4 years ago

    by Cindy

    Lucero
    What a beautiful piece you have penned. I love how you have described the moon...How it is strolling through the sky....oh prideful moon....Just lovely.......lighting the sky so as not to fear the dark.
    Excellent job!
    Take care
    Cindy
    *hugs

  • 4 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Reading this gave me a picture of a celestial being..who goes wherever she feels. I also like how you have used the word strolling-it gives it a magical atmosphere as well as character and at the same time leaves the reader wondering...nicely penned.