Mel, I was tickled to see a poem of yours. They always captivate me. You have been such a strong influence in my writing. This is such a beautiful poem. Though afraid to nominate because I am biased towards your work. What the heck....I'm a rebel...nominated.

Mel,

I don't know you very well at all so I am not biased and thus, will not vote......
No, in truth, I am out of votes already and if I were not, this would get mine; I'm glad Kay has nominated this beautifully written piece.

All the very best from a very non-biased Ben

Why did you not tell me you posted a new poem?

All I see is a neon sign that reads "No Vacancy" flashing...

love the visuals and your creative wording..

wonderful poem here sweets!

"I am biased towards your work"

same..

Another intriguing write from you Mel. I always try to decepher your metaphors but normally I fail miserably haha!! I think this could be about a disruption in your younger years that left you traumatized for a long time. Something that left a void in your life hence your title and, the 'sea' is just now settling...not sure but still a lovely write.

Can you check the word 'slayed' I'm not sure but I think it should be slain?

Judging comment

Mel- I dont know how you do it, but you do... You create masterpieces.

this piece takes me on several angles of messages. Turbulent female wars within the female body, possible birth or renewal... I just dont' know, my head is spinning and I had to highlight this piece!

This is another powerful piece from you and can possibly be interpreted in different ways by the many people that read it.
I interpret it that you have had some really rough times throughout your childhood that you are just trying to get over but it's difficult because of the times you have had.
I also interpreted as something happening that stopped you from doing things you wanted.

As I say many interpretations that only you could possibly know the true meaning of.

All in all a wonderful write. Em