My Dearest

by Spectacle of Serenity   Feb 11, 2016


I can still vividly recall the first time I met you.
You did not notice me but I did notice you.
Your angelic smile has left an indelible imprint in my memory.
I've tried to foget you but I miserably failed.
Since then, my heart keeps on telling me to invite you in. Then I tried.
The happiness untold began to unfold.
So now, I miss you not because you miss me but because you taught me how to feel the emptiness when you're not here.
I love you not because you love me but because you taught everything I never thought existed before.
I'm not supposed to love knowing my inadequacies.
I'm not suppose to care knowing it will never be enough but I love you anyway and

I will love you forever

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  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Hi I did enjoy reading this as its uplifting and shows your undying love for this person.
    The only thing I suggest is writing because fully instead of bec. Also, there is an error on fogot - forgot.

    I feel that this would read better if it was separated a little too, remember though only my opinion.

    E.g.

    "So now, I miss you not because you miss me but because you taught me how to feel the emptiness when you're not here.
    I love you not because you love me but because you taught everything I never thought existed before.
    I'm not supposed to love knowing my inadequacies.
    I'm not suppose to care knowing it will never be enough but I love you anyway and

    I will love you forever."

    All in all, great write.

    Em

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