Vistas- in broken english

by Pratap Rudra   Feb 14, 2016


Village temple
People sitting
Waiting for the priest

Lone on the distance
I watch them
Away from time
It's peace

The breeze flows
Random
Leafy noise

I hear my breath
Empty mind
The clouds surround
Around

Men, move
at distance,
The priest I see now come

More wind flows
Trees talk
Swans in the sky
Abound

Looking through the distance
My eyes
Windows to myself
Unknown

With broken English
this write
Stationed wonder
Alone

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  • 9 years ago

    by Khadz

    "

    More wind flows
    Trees talk
    Swans in the sky
    Abound"

    These line play a imaginary scenario in my mind wow Pratap you doing really good a job !!

  • 9 years ago

    by Pratap Rudra

    Thank You Brenda. A lot.

  • 9 years ago

    by Brenda

    Very nice flow, your visuals are beautiful-well done-

  • 9 years ago

    by Em

    A lovely write.
    Em

    • 9 years ago

      by Pratap Rudra

      Thanks Em, appreciate your comment.

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    This is great. It truly is a peaceful write! Well done
    Ben

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