Hello Dagmar

If only all of us could be so well protected from the world. Great write and I love the format.

All the very best
Ben

Who cut you from the main plant that now you are in a vase and love is only constricted within that vase?

That's the question that came to mind when reading your piece.

Dagmar,

What a beautiful piece with such a deep meaning I feel. It shows you have been hurt in love and in life and your are slowly getting over it, also that you feel alone. That's just my interpretation.

Red is my color
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This opening line is good. The colour red I feel symbolises love and possibly hurt especially as it is one of the most romantic colours.

my fragrance is sweet,
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This I feel lures the reader in more.

I feel safe in a vase filled with love.
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This is beautifully written. It's like you are trapped because you're n the vase but want to be because you want to feel the love, no matter what happens.

My thorns keep me from being harmed.
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A beautiful ending. The use of thorns to stop you being hurt is very well thought out.
I like this because it shows you are fragile (not that i like that) but are willing to love again but not without the strength from inside which I feel are the thorns. I also feel that the vase is your protection from being hurt too.

Lovely piece. Em

Lovely write- sometimes we need our thorns to keep us safe-take care Dagmar-

Hi Dagmar

Short but full of imagery. Red stands for so much, love vibrancy, warmth, war, blood
fragrance is sweet - softens the colour of red, safe in a vase filled with love brings the imagery back in to a love filled haze and amongst the love warmth and vibrancy thorns a sharp side which will protect.
A lovely write. Milly x