by Ben Pickard
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Brenda |
by Mr. Darcy
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Don't worry Ben, I have your back! |
by Em
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Brenda, this is perfect. I love how you wrote about everything you think you are not but as Ben says if you are as wonderful off this site as you are on it then you are wonderful. |
by Brenda
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Thanks to all of you! I will definitely work on the confidence- all of your kind words have really made my day! You guys rock! Your right about a fine line between modesty and no confidence - I grew up always thinking I never was all that, still carry some of that with me, add bad relationships, bad choices and it can bring you to a low level. This is why I love this site so much, it's given me a voice to express and grow. I hope you all have an awesome day! Brenda |
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This is superb Brenda. How many of us live different lives in our heads I wonder, instead of showing the world how proud we are to be ourselves. |
by Brenda
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Thank you Cassie! You hit the nail on the head on how we dream of what we want to be vs what real life is. I sometimes have these crazy dreams and laugh so hard because I'm things I would never be in a million years. Take care-Brenda |
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Brenda this is a lovely poem with great comparisons. Life is made special by what you feel inside and the very fact your poem tries to play down your talents is so endearing and from what I have come to know of you from this site I would say you don't do yourself justice. You are very talented and I love this poem. Anyone who has the capacity to dream has the capacity to do wonderful things in my eyes. Take good care and keep writing Milly xx |
by Brenda
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Awww, thanks Milly! I once had a dream I was on America's Top Model, it was hilarious! My husband is always asking me what I ate before I go to bed because of these crazy dreams. I really appreciate your kind words.Take care-Brenda |
by Mr. Darcy
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Hello Brenda, |
by Brenda
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Michael, thank you so much! Thank you for nominating me also, it really means a lot- I also appreciate all the helpful suggestions you provide - take care-Brenda |
by Ben Pickard
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Brenda - another win for another thoroughly original piece; well done. |
by Brenda
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Ben, thank you very much! I really appreciate all the comments and push you give-take care-Brenda |
by Anesu Joseph Chihambakwe
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Beautiful..!!! |
by Brenda
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Thank you so much! |
by DarkLight
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Great mind, |
by Brenda
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Thank you so much for your kind words-I really appreciate them. |
by GB
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Congratulations Brenda, this is totally different and special. I like those writings which illustrate the women in very successful positions, classy layout and beautiful wording as well. |
by Brenda
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Thank you so very much! Congratulations on your poem also-it was amazing! Very deep, very intense. |
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Very nice poem written with high heart. I like the format also. This kind of writing really deserves the win. Congratulation. |
by Brenda
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Thank you so much! I really appreciate your comments-take care- |