Comments : The lover of the Sun. (Crystalline)

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Beautiful, Samia. Delicate beauty corked in a tiny bottle, or some other awful metaphor like that! lol

    Take care,
    Ben

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    So lovely, I posted twice! :)

  • 7 years ago

    by Brenda

    This is just lovely! What a neat form of writing!

  • 7 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello Samia,

    for some reason I thought I had commenting on this poem. It inspired me to write one, so I must have concentrated on that instead of doing this:

    I love the alliteration and imagery of weightless and invisible sun ray kisses. The 'crystal clear requirement is skillfully interpreted here.

    Thanks for the inspiration.

    Take care,

    Michael

  • 7 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    A lovely Penn GB!!!

  • 7 years ago

    by Mortal Utopia

    Beautiful!