Robert, as always this is beautiful. We should all feel a love like this so enchanting and beautiful and especially true.
Love the structure and your use of words. Very unique.

Em

Well, is is a total submission!
I think you followed a very difficult rhyme scheme here, lovely job, Robert.

Robert, very beautiful poem.
I wish we could all feel as loved as the above.
I look forward to reading more of your work.

D.D xx