Hello Andrea

As dark as the tone is at the start of this piece, it ends with a lovely note of optimism which is lovely to read (for me, anyway!)

"quiver within a crypt of cynical skeletons"

^^

Great line. Imagery, alliteration, the way you have displayed it etc.

Love this. All the best,

Ben

Andrea, dark but visually and emotionally perfect. Another great write. Milly x

Very lovely mixed poem :)
Love it

This gave me a chilling feeling for some reason. It's so beautiful. I love it.