Hello and a warm welcome to the site.

This is a fluent and well rhymed little piece which I love as the poetry world needs an injection of good rhyme again.

Great first post,

SL

Welcome to PnQ's.

Lovely poem with good flow and use of language.

Take care,

Michael

Welcome to P&Qs

You're piece may be short but it gives out a very clear message. I like the rhyming and use of language and look forward to reading more.

All the best, Em

Welcome to P&Q
Lovely rhyming piece as others have already stated. I enjoyed reading it.
It flows well!

Well done on your first piece here.

This flows very well. Nice job on the structure and rhyme.