Haunted (Triolet)

by stormingdance (Lessa)   Aug 16, 2016


I trace the lines of your timbered soul
That echo through the wilderness
Your brazen silhouette made sharp and bold
I trace the lines of your timbered soul
Where nature breathes me whole
She leaves us free to be creative and aimless
I trace the lines of your timbered soul
That echo through the wilderness.

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  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    This is beautiful, the imagery is perfect.
    I will have to look this up as not familiar with this form, maybe a footnote would help?

    Em

  • 7 years ago

    by Brenda

    Wonderful-as a nature write it really weaves a lovely story-

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    This is excellent, Amariah. I love reading and writing nature pieces and I have read two from you in five minutes!
    To be honest, like so many other forms, the triolet is one I have meant to try and will get onto eventually.

    You mentioned that you had added me to your favourites - you are now well and truly in mine, also.

    Great stuff,

    SL

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