This is amazing - no! ...More, much more than this...

its, a hand grenade explosion in my minds eye.

Well done.

Take care,

Michael

A beautiful piece of descriptive poetry. Your writing is inspirational.

SL

Hi kabayan,

excellent writing, the readers of this poem will never let any words and line slip on their eyes...include me in.

Gel

As above, this is something else. The imagery and reminiscing fitted perfectly.
I can tell this person meant a lot to you and probably still does, love is hard very hard indeed.

Em

So very lovely! Your imagery is breathtaking, so beautiful. A picture painted with a thousand words about the one you love.

Ahhhhhh... such a lovely poem.

5/5

Very nice visual and emotional poem loved very much the last two lines

wasn't meant for your geography,but I studied it so well. Milly x

Judging Comment:

Wow! This one is something pretty much every member here relates to at some point or another within their life story, and this week, this author definitely hit that feeling out of the park! Effortless, simple images with a personal twist allow the pain to effect the entire audience as well as clear the poet's mind (we hope) of some of the heartache. It is elegant in it's own way, and this piece really does touch the hearts of the community. The author's voice is clear and still extremely unique while managing to continue playing off of a universal experience. The diction elevates the piece with a nice contrast to the easy images, and the graceful flair that was incorporated among the sorrow/longing was amazingly captivating. Stunning piece.