Blame me not!

by El_Mabini   Sep 1, 2016


Can compare to an angel
but worst like a demon from hell.
Just hiding inside
in this innocent facade

Oppressed emotion of mine
Burst like a flaming flare
Dazzle through the air
Causing such a lot of pain.

Blame me not!
For being like this.
for it is not my fault.
to become a beast.

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  • 6 years ago

    by Em

    Celine, this is a dark piece full of imagery and somewhat sadness behind the whole of it.
    I have a few suggestions if that's ok?

    Can compare to an angel
    but worst like a demon from hell.
    Just hiding inside
    in this innocent facade
    ^^
    On the outside I could compare to an angel
    but inside reaching out is a demon from hell
    just creeping out of my innocent facade.

    Oppressed emotion of mine
    Burst like a flaming flare
    Dazzle through the air
    Causing such a lot of pain.
    ^^
    Bursts out like a flaming flare

    Blame me not!
    For being like this.
    for it is not my fault.
    to become a beast.
    ^^
    I become a beast.
    Remember they are only suggestions. All in all a good write. Em

    • 6 years ago

      by El_Mabini

      Thank you so much for the suggestion.

    • 6 years ago

      by El_Mabini

      Thank you so much for the suggestion.