Comments : You are my Academic

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    What a beautiful and original dedication, Gel.
    The way you have broken down your love for this person into academic subjects is quirky and wonderful all at once.
    If the subject of this piece really is better than those four names at the bottom, they must be one hell of a person!

    Speak soon,

    Ben

    • 9 years ago

      by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

      Thank you Ben,

      thanks for having time looking at my piece. .
      and your comment is another bonus points. ..hahaha ;)

      thanks

      Gel

  • 9 years ago

    by Augustus Black

    Well! Ate Gel.
    You have done a great calculation of love. It's a very nice crafted work in all the three fields : Mathematics, Science and Literature.

    I would also like to say that it's a different kind of poem.

    All the best.

    • 9 years ago

      by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

      Thanks Lil Bro,

      we can make our own self form poetry. ..and this is an example of a mix and match. ..hahaha....Thanks for reading

      have a blessed day

      Ate(big sister ) Gel

  • 9 years ago

    by Em

    A truly beautiful and unique dedication Gel.

    All the best, Em

  • 9 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Hi Em,

    Thank you so much

    :)

    Gel

  • 9 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Thanks to all of you

  • 9 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Uniquely clever and wonderful tribute to true love.

    Well done,

    Michael

  • 9 years ago

    by Brenda

    Just lovely-such a beautiful dedication to your loved one. Very unique write-

  • 9 years ago

    by Dancing Rivers

    Damn!!!! I'm officially a fan of your art!!! You're incredible!!!

  • 9 years ago

    by Nicolette

    I really like how you've incorporated many aspects within one compact poem, love it!

  • 9 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    Hello,

    First off: the title. Wonderfully intriguing. Secondly, I thought the layout was witty and fun. And thirdly, I was very pleased to see such interesting choices in wording. I find so many people re-use the same old words, but here it looks like you've tried to break free from that.

    Regards,

    Bradley

    P.S. Please comment and vote honestly on every piece you read.

    • 9 years ago

      by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

      Hello Brad,

      thanks for the comment.
      and yes, if I like what I read, I drop down a comment or suggestion. But if I don't like,I rather not quote the piece. I don't want to hurt someone's feeling.

      Thank you so much for reminding me
      have a bless day. :)

      Gel

  • 9 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Judging Comment:

    This is an interesting twist on the idea of relating love to education, I don't know why that's so popular but I've seen it quite a bit since joining here. The breaking up of the piece into subject matters is interesting and reminds me of setting up a shared binder in school for all your subjects - so that was a cool use of style. The voice comes out clearly and the authors admiration for this person is powerful. The word choice is interesting and works well here because each section includes vernacular devoted to each specific subject as well as the perspective of the author towards each of these themes. This was a breath of fresh air and very well put together.

  • 9 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Thank you all for the comments and most especially to the judges. ...my heart filled with happiness right now knowing that many appreciates my works. .. And for that my hands and thought wanna do more, craving for more and want to make more. ... Thank you so much guys

    Great day to all of us....

    Gel

  • 8 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    This is beautifully and cleverly crafted! I love it.