Comments : Sky (Acrostic + Haiku)

  • 5 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Brilliant! Truly! I never would have thought of mixing the two forms and you have done so to really great effect.
    Nothing has been lost or forced because of the limitations that the acrostic side of it may have applied and the piece as a whole is inspirational.
    I will nominate this on Monday when my votes are back and I won't forget.

    All the best
    Ben

    • 5 years ago

      by stormingdance (Jessica)

      Thanks, Ben! I have other Haiku's/Acrostics, Dew, Arc, and Key. I intend on writing more as they are my favorite forms. :)

  • 5 years ago

    by Brenda

    This is really cool! I agree with Ben, I have never thought of mixing these two together. You really have done a flawless job of putting these together-well done-

  • 5 years ago

    by Brenda

    This is really cool! I agree with Ben, I have never thought of mixing these two together. You really have done a flawless job of putting these together-well done-

  • 5 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Hi Jessica,

    this is a great writing. . I love mixed poetry also
    playing with the forms makes a new form. ..

  • 5 years ago

    by Augustus Black

    Fantastic work of mind. Brilliantly written using the nature flow.

  • 5 years ago

    by Em

    Huge congratulations

  • 5 years ago

    by Em

    Huge congratulations

  • 5 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Lovely to see this win, Jessica. Well done.

  • 5 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Well done with the mixed form poetry and at the same time it conveys with a painted picture of the writer's outlook...good job!

    Congrats on the Win!

  • 5 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    A very nice written Haiku. . I love it

    Gel

  • 5 years ago

    by Trish

    I love this format, and the beauty in the words

  • 5 years ago

    by Trish

    I love this format, and the beauty in the words

  • 5 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Judging Comment:

    For being haiku, this piece carries more than a few meanings within it's amazing imagery. I love that the formatting looks like a cloud as well, which is a cool touch considering it's meant to be about the sky - at least on the surface. The imagery here is extremely vivid and the use of voice is amazingly well incorporated. Lovely write.

  • 5 years ago

    by Everywoman

    So short yet so powerful. So unique yet so universal. Just amazing. Hats off to ya :)

  • 4 years ago

    by Lucifer

    It says so much in just 3 lines. Healing yesterday's heartbreak gives it an optimistic ending. Like what happened, we should forget and move on because today is the new beginning.