Brilliant! Truly! I never would have thought of mixing the two forms and you have done so to really great effect.
Nothing has been lost or forced because of the limitations that the acrostic side of it may have applied and the piece as a whole is inspirational.
I will nominate this on Monday when my votes are back and I won't forget.

All the best
Ben

This is really cool! I agree with Ben, I have never thought of mixing these two together. You really have done a flawless job of putting these together-well done-

This is really cool! I agree with Ben, I have never thought of mixing these two together. You really have done a flawless job of putting these together-well done-

Hi Jessica,

this is a great writing. . I love mixed poetry also
playing with the forms makes a new form. ..

Fantastic work of mind. Brilliantly written using the nature flow.

Huge congratulations

Huge congratulations

Lovely to see this win, Jessica. Well done.

Well done with the mixed form poetry and at the same time it conveys with a painted picture of the writer's outlook...good job!

Congrats on the Win!

A very nice written Haiku. . I love it

Gel

I love this format, and the beauty in the words

I love this format, and the beauty in the words

Judging Comment:

For being haiku, this piece carries more than a few meanings within it's amazing imagery. I love that the formatting looks like a cloud as well, which is a cool touch considering it's meant to be about the sky - at least on the surface. The imagery here is extremely vivid and the use of voice is amazingly well incorporated. Lovely write.

So short yet so powerful. So unique yet so universal. Just amazing. Hats off to ya :)

It says so much in just 3 lines. Healing yesterday's heartbreak gives it an optimistic ending. Like what happened, we should forget and move on because today is the new beginning.