Fragrance of hope

by DarkLight   Sep 10, 2016


She read my soul
cupping it with her arms
right I move, her smile I see
left I try, all I see is her eyes.
Dark cloud is lifted
breaking me with the sunlight
leaving fragrance of hope
Who knew my cold ice heart was capable of feeling.

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  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Shank what a beautiful little piece you have written. I agree with Ben though about it being ironic that the one thing that causes icy hearts is the one thing that cures them ans you portrayed this well. I guess love can be sp difficult at times yet beautiful.

    All the best, Em

    • 7 years ago

      by DarkLight

      Em Thanks for that comment

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hello Shanky.

    A beautiful and inspirational poem here. I've always found it ironic that the very thing that can cause a hard, cold heart is often the only thing that can cure it: love.

    Great write and all the best,

    Ben

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