Comments : Death by Alien

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    N, I loved this. Very unique and says so much in so little.

    Em

    • 7 years ago

      by deeplydesturbed

      Thanks em
      I had to put the comment due to the site not recognising it long enough for a poem :P

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Great stuff, Naomi. I like it when writers push the boat out and think outside the box.
    An original piece.

    Take care,

    Ben

  • 7 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Hi Naomi,

    Wow what a nice Acrostic poem..You did it very well .

    Take care

    Gel

  • 7 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    I like this, it reminds me a little of the X-Files. Usually, we think of covert experiment areas where men in white lab coats perform Alien autopsies. But, here, a nice twist. Death comes in the form of humans being on the table and the Aliens in the lab coats. A sweet justice, I think?

    Well done,

    Michael

  • 7 years ago

    by Brenda

    Naomi, what a very neat acrostic-very X-Files, Area 13ish-I liked it!