Concrete poetry is one of my favourites. This is a good effort with a challenging shape. I may even have a go myself this weekend.

Well done,

Michael

Really cool and very informative write-I really liked this a lot-

Good job with the shape poetry. Its a difficult one to do and you managed to pull it off with a nice description about a star...well done!

Gel,

This really is very good. Concrete poems aren't easy to achieve on this site so I admire your perseverance with them.
What I admire more (and it's too little noted on this site) is when someone not only has the capability to learn a foreign language, but then write poetry in it. That's no easy task and so for that, I applaud you.

As for stars, I will look at them differently from this point forth!

Take care, Gel

Thank you, Sir Ben for such a beautiful comment.I'm glad you appreciate my piece...

Fantastic poem!

Really good word choice and that shape is crazy!! I have tried to write like this but usually struggle and then abandon it lol great write!